primary source analysis

download the attachment file and revise the paper, I wrote the comments and all what I need in red so just read them and include them in the paper. you can delete what is not nessasery and add what is, please please please: just use the primary source that I will also include, just the primary sourec which is ” Announcment of the Duke of Shao”. I don’t need other sources just that source and it is in the attachment files.