I have returned with comments all the papers that have been sent to me as drafts for part 1. Now our job is to get them finished as part 1 and put the completed perfect paper aside and prepare part 2

I have returned with comments all the papers that have been sent to me as drafts for part 1.  Now our job is to get them finished as part 1 and put the completed perfect paper aside and prepare part 2.  I am attaching the format I want part 2 to take.  But I will not be reviewing part 2 until part i is completely done to your satisfaction.  You have an opportunity to get it perfect and garner all the points available.  When you say this is the final writing I will accept and move on to part 2. You are driving this but my goal is for you to work part 1 into a “perfect” paper.  Part 2 addresses the minimum of 8 research articles.  Follow the format I am forwarding.  Make sure you follow APA format for citing articles in the paper and in the preparation of the reference list.  Remember you are preparing a proposal to go to the IRB so as much descriptive information as possible should be available to the reviewers. For instance, one of the students had a grid from the hospital data.  They should be added as an Appendix and in the final paragraph you would state that additional data is available in Appendix A which demonstrates….Part 3 is the statement re: IRB. Following that you will include references list in alphabetical order.