2-page narrative draft and peer edit’

n1.2-page narrative draft and peer editAs you draft your narrative essay (on having a beiief shattered), you will need some feedback about how the essay is working. By this Friday night, pleasexc2xa0POST your 2 pagexc2xa0draft, and several classmates will read and give you gentle feedback. : ) Use these guidelines to give helpful feedback please. :)essay structurexc2xa0Does the writer have a thesis that is arguable?xc2xa0Does the writer have an introduction, three body paragraphs and a conclusion?xc2xa0What specific examples does the writer use to prove thesis:body paragraph structureDoes each body paragraph have an effective topic sentences?Does each paragraph have a reference to a specific source?Is each piece of evidence used explained?Does the writer link each body paragraph back to the thesis?spelling, capitalization, grammatical errors, subject-verb agreement, run-ons or fragments?2.Discussion: Strayed, Weisel, and Walkerxe6x97xa0xe6x9cxaaxe8xafxbbxe7xadx94xe5xa4x8dxe3x80x8211 xe4xb8xaaxe7xadx94xe5xa4x8dxe3x80x82After reading the narrative essays of the above authors, write paragraphs about HOW THE ESSAYS were built.xc2xa0Describe the language, describe the themes, describe the tone, describe what was particularly moving.xc2xa0Which of the essays seemedxc2xa0strongest? Can you think of a few reasons why that might be?Write a paragraph dedicated to each essay and write at least 8 sentences per paragraph. Thanks!* As usual, post by Friday night @ 11, and then respond to 3 or more classmates by Sunday night.xc2xa0 ‘