College comp. discussion 9 | English homework help

This week, you will identify a common editing concern that you have such as passive voice, apostrophes, commas, or fragments. Review this week’s reading from The Kaplan Guide to Successful Writing and the Writing Center resources in this week’s Grammar Lab to learn more about that error, or find another resource on the internet. 

Then, discuss how the resource you selected helped to clarify any questions you had.

Finally, provide some examples of corrections you made to your draft (or another component of the portfolio) after reviewing this material. Demonstrate to your classmates how to fix those comma splices and passive voice sentences.

To conclude your post, discuss any other challenges you face as you revise and edit your draft this week and prepare the presentation component of your final project.

Your post should be approximately 200-250 words.


I have attached both my draft and changes to help with this discussion.